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BLACK ATTACK!

1. Rupert and Cookie are sloppily kissing each other.  Cookie is leading and licking Rupert's face with her tongue.
C: Mmmm...
R: Oh yeah.

2. Rupert and Cookie are still kissing each other.  This time, she is licking a big zit on Rupert's cheek.  Flo comes in from the right.

3. Flo sticks her tongue out and makes a disgusted face while Cookie and Rupert look at her and react.
F: YUCK!  Rupe, why would you ever wanna date anybody that skinny!  She's so skinny, I bet when she was born, her mom thought she'd passed a stick of licorice!

4. Rupert looks out of it, Cookie looks furious, and Flo starts flirting with Rupert, putting one hand behind her head and making a kissy face at him.
F: So why don't you try me?  If you want something exotic, try kosher!

5. Cookie pushes Rupert behind her.
C: Stand back, sugah, time for Cookie to attack black!

6. Cookie leans forward and asks Flo a question.
C: Flo honey, you ever hear of the dozens?
7. Flo eyes Cookie haughtily.
F: Of course I have, I've seen those game shows on tv!  That's where people insult each other's mothers, and if you get mad, you lose!

8. Cookie smiles evilly at Flo.  
C: You wanna play?

9. Flo smiles back just as evilly.
F: Yep.

10. Cookie goes first.  Flo crosses her arms.
C: Yo' mama is so fat...

11.  Cookie yells, Flo leans back, shocked.
C: SHE REACHED INTO HER BELLY FOLDS AND PULLED OUT A WHOLE BUFFET TABLE!  YEAH!

12. Flo eyes a victorious Cookie.

13. Flo smiles.

14. Flo begins.  Now Cookie crosses her arms.
F: Your mama is so fat...
15. Flo's huge head dwarfs her body, and a tiny Cookie and Rupert.
F: SHE WAS THE STUNT DOUBLE FOR FAT ALBERT!  HAY HAY HAY!

16. Stoned Rupert looks on as angry Cookie glares at triumphant Flo.

17. Rupert picks his nose as the girls look on.

18. Rupert still picks his nose at the girls look at each other.

19. Closeup of Cookie and Flo yelling at each other!
C: YO MAMA SO STUPID, SHE THINKS M&MS ARE W&WS!
F: YO MAMA SO UGLY, THE UGLY TREE GREW OUT OF HER BUTT!
C: YO MAMA SO WHITE, WHEN SHE GO OUTSIDE AT NIGHT, PEOPLE THINK IT'S DAWN!
F: YO MAMA SO POOR, HER FACE IS ON THE FOOD STAMP!

20. Shocked Cookie mumbles for a bit while Flo smiles like the cat that ate the canary.
C: Food stamp, naw, my mama never needed no food stamps...

21. Furious Cookie bares her teeth and leaps on Flo.
C: RAWRRR!
F: YOU LOSE! OW!

22. Rupert stares blankly at the two girls fighting on the ground.

23. Rupert looks at the reader.
R: I think their mums are pretty cute myself.

24. Rupert starts picking his nose again.
This is my entry for fyuvix's PompFiction first anniversary contest on pompfiction.com.

If people like it, I could make it longer!
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Chrysshart Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2010  Student Digital Artist
:giggles: I'd love to see this one, actually. Maybe fyuvix'll do it anyway. . . :P
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ThirdPotato Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
LoL That's pretty cute. XD I think the descriptions of the visuals are the best part, and 17, 18, and 23. XD Thanks for entering! Very interesting! n.n
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